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By Carol Hankermeyer
Poetry in the Park was the theme for the fall Edgewood program at the San Carlos
Charter Learning Center (SCCLC). It was a four-week seminar chosen by nine 2nd
and 3rd graders interested in both writing and nature. I first conducted a
class at the school on poetry writing techniques, reading examples of nature poems to the
children. The second week we explored the Sylvan Trail, using all our senses to learn
about the plants and animals of Edgewood Preserve. Students took notes on plant and animal
names and described how they looked, smelled, sounded, and felt. At the next class meeting
I showed students serpentine rock samples and pictures of the Edgewood grassland in the
spring. Then they used their field notes to write poems about their experience in the
Park.
The finale was another
grand hike on the Edgewood Trail, followed by lunch and student poetry reading in the
picnic area. After youve read their work, I think you will agree that these very
young students did a fine job with their poems. Elise Bowie, who provided transportation
and attended every session, was a great asset to the seminar. We also thank Sheri
Esguerra, Kelly Christensen and Lin Lipinski for their assistance in making this seminar
possible. It was a rewarding experience for all.
Inga Davis, Resource Choreographer for SCCLC, will continue to keep the school actively
involved with Edgewood. She hopes SCCLC will provide a model of stewardship for other Bay
Area schools.
I see a squirrel squirreling around
Gathering his nuts before winter comes
The bark smells like cinnamon
It smells very good
Rainbows fly in the sky
We found a path way
We also found some deer at the end of the path
We found a waterfall
I felt something soft and green
Katie
A beautiful tree with a fly so cold he can't move
A beautiful bird singing at the waterfall at Edgewood park
Pitter-patter went the water
My hair blows in the wind
Deers prance in the park
Oh what a Beautiful Park for you
Relax in the sun shine
having a wonderful time
In the wide open world of big blue shine
Edgewood Trees are as beautiful as you
Tree gum drips from bark
Rainbows fly through the sky
Just like dancing prairies
Carly
TREES
Trees, trees, trees
you are so beautiful
because you give us soothing air that we breathe
Trees, trees, trees
you feel so splendid and soft
Your bark is so hard and bumpy
I love to hug you
James
EDGEWOOD PARK
Edgewood Park is peaceful
Edgewood is the best
I love Edgewood Park
It has animals and trees and plants
I love the animals too
The most best park is Edgewood Park
James
The wind in my face
The waterfalls suddenly turned into
The shadows of the Redwood Trees
Then they turned into beautiful rainbows
I jump on one
I fly in the light blue sky
I slip through the white clear clouds
and I stop in the green soft grass
I pick a flower
Jenny
The free sharing trees
The jumping squirrels
Tree to Tree
Bark of the Willow Tree is talking to me
Natalie
HIKE
I see a squirrel
as beautiful as a leaf
I see Oak that come from Edgewood Park trees
The spaghetti trees smell like sauce
I can see sticks
that I can toss
I see everything
and I see me
The dirt so soft
as soft as moss
I see a rock
I might see a hawk
And the world will
open his arms to me
LaVondra
THE EDGEWOOD PARK
The Edgewood Park bark is bumpy and brown
Rocks are gray and sharp
Leaves are green and yellow
The flowers are yellow and pink and purple white
Edgewood Park is beautiful and green
Rocks and yellow flowers
Heather
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